jezdex144's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[smoking kills?]

Heyy!, here's my review:
the title looks kinda.. unprofessional, but it's alright.
the animation is choppy in some parts, but overall it's pretty nice.
the joke is also well fabricated.
could be better, but it's a nice little animation.

croxsibid responds:

Hey thanks for a the review I'm improving slowly and I made this animation several years back been wanting to put it on madness day but keep forgetting so I posted it anyways and I'm working on another animation I already have the entire story ready but I'm practicing before I actually start it it's going to be another parody animation in madness and after I'm finished then I'm going to get to the real animation I've been wanting to do but thanks for the review I really appreciate it I will definitely improve with time.